Welcome! The application season is in full swing, and I’ve been busy meeting with students and reviewing essays. I love those light bulb moments when my students realize exactly what they want to say! Today I’ll share 10 tips on writing a personal statement.
Show, don’t tell. We’ve all heard this mantra, and it’s true. Instead of stating “I am hard-working” or “I have overcome so much in my life,” show us through a story.
Be specific. Details help to paint a picture and allow your story to come alive. What do you remember about the sights, sounds, tastes, smells, and textures? Where were you when you found out the news? How old were you when this important event happened?
Be clear and concise. Every word should add value to your personal statement. Don’t use ten words when you can convey the meaning in five words.
Don’t tell your whole life story. Your personal statement is not your journal, and the reader will never know everything. Only share those pieces that point to why you are now applying to this school or program.
Reflect. A story by itself does not add value to the personal statement. When you tell a story, share what you’ve learned from that experience and how it shapes who you are today.
Tailor the essay to the school or program. Show why you are interested in the specific school. Don’t just find and replace the name of the school for each essay.
Describe how you add value to the school or program. This is not just about what you will gain from the program, but also what the school gains from having you in the student body.
Stay in the word count. You don’t need that extra word. Staying in the word count demonstrates your ability to follow instructions.
Get feedback. It’s so valuable to get another set of eyes on your essay. Leave room in the review process to receive feedback from family, friends, teachers, and others.
Proofread! I can’t emphasize this enough. Don’t let one typo knock down your chances of admission.