It’s another busy application season, and I’ve loved getting to know many of you through your essays.
Today’s tip is about trimming that essay.
Most of the time, your first draft turns out longer than the allowed word count. In fact, I recommend that your first draft be longer — it’s easier to cut. My philosophy is: don’t include extra words when you can say something in fewer words. Every word should add purpose.
When you find yourself facing a couple hundred extra words, two days before your essay is due, here are some ways you can 1) cut words and 2) strengthen your essay.
Use active voice.
Okay: “The school was where I learned to be a better person.”
Better: “I learned to be a better person at the school.”
Eliminate linking verbs.
Okay: "I was able to learn about myself through the experience.”
Better: “I learned about myself through the experience.”
Break up sentences.
Okay: “I moved across the country, started at a new school, and struggled to make friends, and because of this I felt lost.”
Better: “I moved to a new country, started at a new school, and struggled to make friends. I felt lost.”